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a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Mizumiroku on Sun Jul 19, 2009 8:15 pm

Okay, U must write a story in naruto universe, but not obout naruto characters, it must be fun fiction.


  • 1st place - 300 points
  • 2nd place - 200 points
  • 3rd place - 100 points


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  • Me
  • BijuuGuy
  • dsds
  • sasuketk


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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by BijuuGuy on Sun Jul 19, 2009 8:38 pm

Yay i´m a judge I´ll PM RMaster if he wants to be a judge
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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Leontk on Wed Jul 22, 2009 2:12 pm

i wanna judge
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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by BijuuGuy on Fri Aug 07, 2009 8:07 pm

Well what are you waiting for all get started

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Leontk on Fri Aug 07, 2009 10:08 pm

apparently no one can make a story cuz they are stupid good thing im here
OK...heres an example:
"a story of a war"
kageru is a boy living in a forest with his father he is a master of fire jutsus trained by his father.
the enemy ninjas from the dark village of pookagakuro(lol didnt find better name)these ninja are masters of wind meaning kageru has an advantage,
the village also called the village hidden in the smoke cuz if you go around you only find smoke before actually finding the village.
kageru and his family live in sensoto forest a deep dark forest next to the smoke zone,he lives with his mother maria his little brother koreo and his master his father master soyoto
they originaly came to the forest after living theyre village the village of katokageru or village hidden in the fire forest reason for that is unknows exsept the forest around the village
now than lets begin the story
*kageru writing in his war diary*
kageru:dear diary
its been 6 months since the war began
dad been starting to go back to the village for food and wepons
his prepering for something big
my little brother strated studing cooking
when i asked him why he told me
*flashback*
kageru:koreo whats with you making dinner mom usually makes dinner
koreo:well usually yeah but now i want to make some as well
kageru:thats a reason???
koreo:do i need a reason
kageru:(ah...does he mean that he noticed)
koreo:both mom and dad started acting strange
kageru:SO YOU NOTICED
koreo:umm you too???
kageru:yeah
*back to diary*
kageru:a week back our house was attacked
they were pook nins
there were 16 dad took all of them head on
3 escaped and attacked me mom and koreo
they took her hostage
and they were thinking i was such a wickling that cant use anything from behind i used katon karego no jutsu(fire beam attack)
it was simple they were weaklings
but its starting to get ann
maria:kageru come down time for dinner
kageru:coming mom...did koreo make meal again???
anyway
starting to get annoying
more and more of them pass by here and attack
im waiting...
once i can awake my sharingan ill start taking advanced training and start actually do things...
dad would finnaly be proud
*closed diary*
*going downstairs and sitting on a chair next to table full of food*
kageru:so dad when should my sharingan awake
soyoto:if you keep asking it wont awake at all
kageru:*mummble*
writer:koreo was always the favorite
even kageru noticed it
koreo:and mine dad when will my sharingan will awake
writer:the closest person to kageru was his brother
soyoto:soon koreo soon
kageru:munch munch (ill kill you koreo i promise i will)
*6 days later*
kageru's mom died from a raid and kageru killed his brother
after they both awakening the sharingan making kageru stronger than his father though hes father didnt know that kageru did it
kageru:this jutsu is easy dad KARENAGU NO JUTSU(fire volcano trap)
soyoto:(why does he able to use these type of jutsus so easily)not perfect
kageru:dad look its hawky hey hawky
writer:hawky or hes name later on is takageru is kageru's pet hawk whitch he found in the wild
kageru:hawky where were you lost
hawky:kwu kwee
kageru:umm ok look at my new jutsu KARENAGU NO JUTSU
hawky:*flying away*
kageru:bye bye hawky
*6 months later*
kageru:SHARINGAN
father i challange you
soyoto:finnaly lets see if you can
kageru:hehe ill kill you with one attack
writer:kageru changed hes heart filled with dakrness his cold stare could kill a person and his sharingan stronger than ever
kageru:AMATERASU
soyoto:what dark flame haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
writer:kageru killed his father
kageru:time to end the war
oh hawky im gonna call you takageru
hawk and a piece of my name now you are my only friend
my diary ill write something and let you take it to the
katokage NOW GO
*kageru writes a last thing*
kageru:my last diary point ive killed my brother after my mom's death for power and stole his eyes later i killed my father
now i know ill destroy pookagakeru on my own and my target is pookage
my father trained me well
*closes diary and ties to takageru*
kageru:my...war story in 1 book man thats rich
*takageru starts flying while kageru enters pookagakeru*
kageru:POOK NINS COME ON OUT ILL KILL ALL OF YOU
pook nins:what the... whos that jokster lets kick his ass
kageru:undermasting your opponent so easily THIS WAR IS OVER TODAY
dont ask why just give me the pookage
PN(SHORT FOR POOKNINS):as if
we will never let you get to the pookage
yeah
as if you will never get close
kageru:weaklings why assemble into one triangle hehe
KARENAGU NO JUTSU
PN:haaaaaaaa
oh no
this jutsu...
the wind makes it aaaaaaaaaaa
we will di haaaaaa
ghaaaaaaaaaaa
noooooooooooooo
kageru:SHARINGAN
Katon:Karenagoto no jutsu(exploding fire jutsu makes fire explode from users body and destroy everything around the user)
PN:nooooooooooooooooo
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
AHHHHHHHHH
YOU BASTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH
POOKAGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AHHHHHHHHH
DAMN IT AHHHHHHHHHHHH
kageru:see i told you
*kageru enters the pookage office*
pookage:who are you(hes name will be PK)
kageru:well im the one who kills you
PK:hehe you know i dont fight meaning i got no jutsus
kageru:whatever MANEKOSENKO NO JUTSU(dark fireballs attack)
PK:ahhhhhhhh
*after PK died kageru continued hes life as a boy a missing nin and a killer with that the 15kth ninja war was over

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by BijuuGuy on Fri Aug 07, 2009 10:22 pm

Cool story i liked it

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Leontk on Fri Aug 07, 2009 10:28 pm

ty im pretty much good i was practicing most of my time at school cuz of litereture class

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by BijuuGuy on Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:48 am

Wait you´re having school already??? how long is your summer vacation

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Leontk on Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:51 am

noooo
im still in summer im talking about when i was in school before summer i still have around a month left

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by BijuuGuy on Sat Aug 08, 2009 11:36 am

oh okay me too

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by dsds on Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:39 pm

Good story!!!
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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Leontk on Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:52 pm

ty man

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Mizumiroku on Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:05 pm

I like ur story and U r the only person who write one than I think U should win this contest.

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Leontk on Sun Aug 23, 2009 6:27 pm

1 problem im a judge XD i only used that story as an example XD

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Re: a naruto universe story contest.

Post by Mizumiroku on Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:01 pm

um. i forget xD

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